good comments and bad comments

This week we have being learning about good comments and bad comments and high lighting it and commenting if its good or bad. and i had to like or non like dislike.

Christiaan's holidays

In the holidays i did some pretty cool

Stuff ‘let me tell you 

In the first few weeks my Oma came up

on Saturday. She loves going for walks so i had to go with her 

4 km! On Sunday my Aunt came up and we had a big fest me just chilling in my bed playing game then i felt sad so i went out and 

Ate all of the food.

On Tuesday my sister and I went down to my dads down in Whangarei, I went to the movies

With my friends the movie was sonic the hedgehog the staring was my favourite part. Then when i got to my house

I went back to the mall with my friends we got milk! Tea. I got

A phone for calling people. Then we

Went to sushi we got this chicken with rice

To the movies. Then watched spys in disguse was cool.

When the next day came we got up early and now the long trip begins

Skip 1 hour we made it “i'm tired” then i went to my friends across the road we did

 Some tail whips it was really cool.

Now back to school